what are my chances???

just4ivaylo
Tue, 01 Dec 2009 22:45:51 +0000

First of all, I don’t see how his first language has any relevance in this. I’m not saying he can’t speak or write in English correctly. That’s obvious that he can, because if he couldn’t he wouldn’t be attending a school offering IB courses. His ideas are presented well, but the errors that he has detract from his essay.