What exactly would be a good hook?

crumflake
Tue, 12 Apr 2005 00:50:49 +0000

hey, i honestly think… it was cause i lived on the bottom ofthe sea and can only liveon land for five years and then i have to return…so they wanted themselves to be the thing i remebered about my life on land…

ok honestly, i think it was my leadership activities, and perhaps my essay (which talked about my trip to israel and how it has tremendously affected the way i view and treat people). and maybe cause a brown alumni vouched for me too… perhpas not… but i had great recomendations ( i got to read them)… but i think its leadership… im on the school board and ive been on a youth council since its birth. 3.86/1200/29act. i am totally not a 4.0/1600/800^5 and all 5 on ap with 20 ap classes, sometimes, they want character… but i dont know, i mean i only have a 1200 haha