what makes a persuasive transfer essay?

aerialblue
Mon, 12 Jan 2009 20:58:05 +0000

Passion for the subject you’re transfering for and detailed knowledge about what the college offers in that arena, including profs names and research that’s come out of the school.



I like hmom5’s idea. It’s safe and easy to write about, and can be very effective depending on how involved (and thus, how detailed you can describe your activities) you are in your area. Not to mention, this avenue has worked for many successful transfers here on CC - including that guy who got into Yale. I think if you want to “show” and not “tell,” hmom5’s idea is an easy way to go about it. Quite frankly, I find essays that preach or talk about feelings to be quite ineffective.

Plus, being affable/funny are always pluses.