Which first sentence should I use?

wanderlusting
Mon, 12 Jan 2009 20:19:08 +0000

I agree with everyone who said that it would help to know what the context of the essay was, but based purely on whether or not it grabs your attention, I thought that - “The ducks—they’re laughing at me.” and “Coffee makes me sleepy.” - were the most intriguing. Although, all of the sentences were great, in all honesty.