Will someone please rate this essay?

dreamchaser50
Sun, 30 Nov 2014 21:35:35 +0000

I’d probably go with a 10 based on the quality itself. Things to think about: Will this essay take up the full two pages? (readers tend to like that) I’m not sure how they will feel about only one body paragraph. Oedipus Rex is a fairly common piece and, unless there are different version, this sounds more like Perseus and his grandfather Acrisius. Oedipus killed his father and several of his men by sword at a crossroads in Phocis. Also, Oedipus’ feet were impaled thus the name Oedipus (swollen feet) and he was saved by a shepherd who was supposed to kill him. I feel like you could have used only Oedipus Rex as a source, but used 2 body paragraphs (1 for Laius’ prophecy and 1 for Oedipus’). These errors and lack of length could result in a lower score.