will someone read my essay please?

<p>parents and students alike>> please PM me! i need some feeedback!!</p>

<p>acutally you can just leave a message and i will PM you!! </p>

<p>please help, i'm afraid it sounds negative or like i;'m victimizing myself in the essay, since its about a negative experience social experience that i dealt with. i want the focus to be that i overcame the experience, but i need a lsecond opiion. thanks!!</p>

<p>you can pm me</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>thanks! the essay has been pmed to you guys (fi you didnt get it tell me).</p>

<p>anyone else want to help? i will love you forever!</p>

<p>I'll look at it.</p>

<p>ill look at it too.</p>