Williams Supplement Essay - Up for Sharing?

xcgirl473
Mon, 24 Jan 2011 00:31:16 +0000

In response to the word limit… yeahh… i might have stretched it by 20 words or so I hope the committee doesn’t mind. I didn’t feel like it would have the same effect if it was shorter.

rd: I really liked your approach. At first I was a bit confused (wait… he’s already gone to Williams?) but I realized the instant afterward that it was a future perspective. Creative! The whole thing flowed nicely, and I think the whole futuristic aspect will set yours apart - in a good way!

coal: Now i understand your CC name haha… i especially liked your ending. The fact that you brought the mining helmet on the mantle into the scene really brought the significance, showing the impact your grandfather had on you. Also great title!