wondering, which ACT do I go with and why?

ForskakenOne
Sat, 05 Sep 2009 17:26:59 +0000

aside from the formula I sent to you. I write about three pages in length. I use a lighter tone so as not to get too heavy on the reader. my intros are always creative in some way opening with a quote or attention getter. My conclusion always refers to the first opening ine and recaps all the previously stated points. I try to use a higher level of fluency rather than an above and beyond vocabulary. Become a human thesaurus, I avoid redundancy in my sentence structures at all cost. I always answer YES to the question rgardless of how I feel, its much easier to argue for something than against it. I always present the reader with the counter arguement that opposes me, but never so that its so strong it outweighs my own arguements. I do thesis, three points at the beginning under broader subjects.
ie: if the topic is graffiti in a community.
point 1) Vandalism boosts crime rates
2) Defacing of communities lessens resell values for homeowners.

rather than saying both those, Id group them together in the opener under a broader category.
ie: When examining the ideas revolving around grafitti in communities, there can be observed certain downfalls in the overall quality of that certain society.

I love to be formulaic, but the trick is not making it read like a formulaic essay. make it personable and anecdotal, not boring and lean cut. But you can never sacrifice organization for humor or creativitiy, you must find a healthy balance to score 10+ consisitently.