Would anyone like to read my Dean's Scholar Essay draft?

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Mon, 04 Feb 2013 15:15:39 +0000

Hello!

I just recently found out that I was accepted into Baruch! I received a second email from them saying that they want me to apply to their Dean’s Scholar program. I didn’t apply for Macaulay so I was surprised that they sent this email. Do they send it to everyone? Anyway, we have to write an essay as part of our application. The topics are:

Evaluate a significant risk you have taken or ethical dilemma you have faced and discuss its impact on you.

Discuss some issue of local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.

Tell us about a book, artwork, or lab experiment that changed the way you see the world.

What was it about the work that affected you? How did your world become different?

Submit a personal essay of your choice.

I just finished my draft and I was wondering if anyone would kindly take few minutes from their day to read it and contribute some suggestions on the areas I can improve upon. Thanks