would u grade my essay?

apperip2
Fri, 21 May 2010 12:48:21 +0000

i’d say a 7,8 or maybe even 9 on 12…in short, good
Your 2nd example doesn’t really fit in does it, it seems wrong to me?(correct me if i’m wrong)-Gatsby deceived Daisy not knowing if it were for the good, and Daisy was already married…
You also seem to have used big words which seem a little out of place; in the beginning, try and write as you would speak…
Stick to easy language, a verbose style of writing is not required for scoring high
The format of the essay is fine…