Would you check out my essay please?

jc2009
Sun, 11 Jan 2009 23:05:53 +0000

Thanks alot, your giving me some hope…

If i rewrite it, would you mind giving it a look for me? It would be greatly apprieciated…I’m not sure if i’m going to have the time to do it, with midterms this week and other papers, but i should be able to do it hopefully, i want to find one more school to apply to XD

Also, should i keep the poem?