Would you check out my essay please?

VandyPrayer
Sun, 11 Jan 2009 22:46:12 +0000

Well, this is how I feel about college essays…

20,000 essays are being written… Make yours stand out. There are gonna be essays about tradgedys, not having a dad aaround, deceased family members, etc. You need to think simple but abstract.

I know this guy who wrote an amazing essay on showing 4th graders how to make paper planes.

By no means is your essay bad… It stands out because of your use of language and the poem, but the topic is bland. No offense to your mother… I’m sure she was an outstanding woman.

You didn’t need to list the activities because that’s what the additional information section is for!