Would you check out my essay please?

hilsa
Sun, 11 Jan 2009 23:17:40 +0000

Ok. I would pick one activity out of the list and emphasize on it, putting in as many details [not necessarily adjectives] as possible. The more descriptive an essay is, the more interesting it is.

You found my myspace? Interesting. I’m glad you liked my essay. I think I’ll post it on here to give other people an example of “simple but abstract.”