Would you check out my essay please?

hilsa
Sun, 11 Jan 2009 14:22:24 +0000

It’s definitely memorable, for the fact that it begins with a poem.

It makes you want to go “aww.”

The only things I can see the admissions people thinking negatively on would be 1) the fact that it seems like you’re just listing stuff that you’ve done, instead of a focus on a few events or 2) that you’re trying to get sympathy for talking about an ill relative.

Unfortunately, some admissions people do think that for the latter.

But I like it.