Writing about religion?

glassesarechic
Thu, 19 Aug 2010 18:47:48 +0000

I think claiming all religions are equally right leads to a “watering-down” of all religions



I agree :).

OP, I think this essay walks a fine line here. What it has going for it is a specific anecdote, a specific experience to describe that keeps you from wandering aimlessly, vaguely through a tricky topic.

I wouldn’t worry about the reader being anti-Muslim. I would worry about sounding exclusive–to other religions, other ways of life.