Yale Supplement short essay...

Feyissa
Wed, 31 Dec 2008 02:36:42 +0000

heres mine:
After reading this prompt I searched for unique reasons that instigated my love for Yale. The truth is, I want to attend your fine institutions because of your varied, extensive resources and attraction avialable such as the Gutenberg Bible, the distinguished ethos of Yale and the fine architecture. Most of all, I would like to earn the best possible education so that I may use it to better the economy and the lives of those less fortunate.

I know the last part seem a little fake but I have things in the rest of my application that support this claim.

So was I too direct