I'd really like to go, unfortunately I don't have any money, I hear they offer partial and full scholarships. I would of course need a full scholarship. What do you think my chances are?
I'm in 11th grade, currently have a 3.88 weighted GPA, a core GPA around a 3.46 (strictly academic courses and no weighting)
Here is my 250 word statment:
For the past few years Ive been blindly working hard toward an abstract concept of success. I didnt know what success would be, but I continued in the hopes that I would be enlightened soon; hopefully before I gave up due to exhaustion. I needed something to revitalize my determination and passion to work hard. This revelation came to me shortly after attending National Portfolio Day, while I always knew I was passionate about art, attending the event helped me to realize what success was to me. I knew that art is what I wanted to do, and that I would do anything to achieve that dream. I think attending your program will help me achieve that dream by helping me improve as an artist and a person. While the monetary expense is intimidating, I am determined to attend and succeed in your program, because now I know what Im working towards, which is to attend your school and do what I love. I will throw myself into your program like I have done with nothing else, and I will succeed if you allow me the opportunity. I will bring my point of view about life, art, and society, as well as my passion, determination and overall tendency to go against the gradient, following what I believe is right, to your program. If you give me a chance, I will return the favor.
And the 5 pieces I'm considering to submit:
Thanks for any feedback.
Here is some other works if you think any of them would be better then the ones I selected: