**Decision: Rejected **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): N/A
ACT (breakdown): superscored 33 (35 E, 33 M, 33 R, 32 S, 32 W) (highest composite: 32)
SAT II: N/A
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.9
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 17/390
AP (place score in parenthesis): 3 Biology, 4 English Lang & Comp, 5 Music Theory
IB (place score in parenthesis): school didn’t offer IB
Senior Year Course Load: AP European History, AP Calculus AB, AP French 5, AP Chemistry, AP Lit and Comp, Civics, Gym, and choir
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): should these be national? I have multiple minor ones through the school, community, state piano competitions, church, and archery club but that’s as far as it goes.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): competitive piano, competitive club archery (assistant coach for Saturday morning practice sessions,) Camp Barnabas (counselor,) Desperation Conference (Sunday school group leader, youth pastor,) weekly volunteer at local hospital (member of Junior Volunteer Leadership Team,) volunteer and management for annual blood drive at Memorial Health System (board of directors,) fundraising for child leukemia patient through the school and local community (co-coordinator,) online author on fanfiction site (I write all-original works to target various things I find wrong with society or social issues like bullying and lack of self esteem.)
Job/Work Experience: internship with Random House over the summer, waitress/hostess, babysitting, tutoring, piano teacher
Volunteer/Community service: participated in 95% of all church coordinated events (youth group pianist and singer, dancer/singer/event planner for many performances, representative member of church volleyball team, monthly soup kitchen volunteer and singer for pre-dinner worship performances, monthly trailer park community volunteer/babysitter/Bible teacher, Black Forest fire aftermath cleanup (cleanup, reconstruction of a burned-down elementary school,) Black Forest National Park and trail cleanup (coordinator,) Korean Culture Day at the library, (model and co-coordinator with my mom,) volunteer for multiple events at the public library through Teen Advisory Board
Pretty sure I’ll have close to 1000 hours by the time I graduate.
Summer Activities: the internship, part-time jobs, tutoring, babysitting, teaching piano
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Reflect on something you would like us to know about you: 9 (most honest essay I’ve ever written; about living with depression, how I relieve any pent-up anger or sadness through my writing, how bullying is wrong and everyone has to love themselves before loving anything else, etc.)
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 10 - AP Euro teacher. Loved me since sophomore year. Talked all positive, all strengths
Teacher Rec #2: 9.5 - AP Calc teacher, I applied as a math major, he talked about how I’m always one step ahead in class and help him out with my other classmates
Counselor Rec: 9 - talked about my junior year in which I was diagnosed with severe depression, explaining the slump in my grades, and said despite that slump, I’m a hard worker
Additional Rec: 6 - my youth pastor never wrote a letter of rec before so it wasn’t that great, but I thought all my bases were covered with the other three.
Interview: wasn’t offered one
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Math, Chemistry, Undecided
State (if domestic applicant): Colorado
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Regular public
Ethnicity: Asian (Korean to be specific, probably worked against me since I wasn’t that stellar of an Asian applicant)
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: ~$100k - ~$150k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): first generation immigrant family living in America (technically zeroth generation attending college in America)
Reflection
Strengths: Letters of rec (minus my youth pastor’s)
Weaknesses: essays, test scores, GPA, school is virtually unknown and doesn’t have that great of an academic reputation
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I was too cookie-cutter of an Asian applicant (not excellent, not bad,) my test scores were probably a little iffy since I took the ACT 3x (4, including the state-mandated one.)
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
Rejected at Duke, Amherst, Columbia, U-Penn, and Colorado College (after being deferred)
Waitlisted at University of Chicago and Washington & Lee
Accepted at all in-state safety universities
General Comments:
My GPA trend was downwards because of the depression and that probably reflected poorly on me. I also only took 2 AP classes junior year so that might’ve seemed to demonstrate laziness or lack of motivation. And I was so burned out by the time I got to this application that I regretfully didn’t even try to write coherently. I just threw down a bunch of truths and called it good. Again, this probably seemed to reflect laziness or even lack of enthusiasm for the school.
I hope this can be of help to future applicants
good luck!