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However, advising students generally not to write about mental illness is problematic. Among great American writers who suffered from mental illness are F. Scott Fitzgerald, Mark Twain, Stephen King, Robert Lowell, and Sylvia Plath. I am glad no one told them not to write, and that some wrote directly about their mental illnesses.
Across the Atlantic, Winston Churchill, a sufferer of "black dog" depression, was somehow able to mobilize nations against Nazis. Glad no one stopped his writing either.
Emphatically forbidding certain essay topics creates or contributes to stigma. A well-written essay on any topic can be impressive, thrilling, or very funny. Not one opportunity for that creativity should be closed off from any essayist.
By far the most significant problem is not the essay topic, but the quality of student writing, some of which is suprisingly bad, most often is middling, and a minority only truly inspired and impressive.
It's a matter of preparation: Applicants should be ready by junior year to write well on any topic. That background had to include vast amounts of reading--for percolating first-rate writing takes time, well before an admissions essay deadline.
As to colleges' refusing students with mental illnesses--surely they know a sizable portion of any entering class has already received therapy and is likely to be on mental health prescriptions? (As are their parents.)
To applicants I would say: Write well, write genuinely, and read everything. Your essay's content and style belong to you. You decide.
It may seem like a pure and truthful thing to discuss this in an essay, but it won't help your admission chances, even if you liken yourself to Sylvia Plath or Churchill. It won't change the reality that they'd rather not open themselves up to the possible difficulties it could bring later. Save it for some other writing exercise if you want to talk about it -- not an essay where they are judging your personality for fit with their college.
I think for some schools, if the transcript and scores are not in the ball park and there are no strong hooks in the app, then the essay might never get read. But if you are a candidate who is qualified for the school, the essay becomes important. It's not going to turn a no way into a yes, but it can turn a 'this is a kid we are considering into this is a kid we're going to admit.'
I work professionally with students on their college essays. My students have been accepted to all kinds of universities and colleges, inlcuding those with single-digit acceptance rates. I recently worked a girl who wrote a bombshell essay about, amongst other things, how she was approached by a homeless drug addict at the age of 14. Amazing writing. I did not tell her she shouldn't write about a gritty, possibly off-putting topic.
I worked with another student who wrote an essay about being bullied all through school, and how ashamed and humiliated he was, and the awful things people said to him. I suggested he revise his essay, and he then changed it instead to discuss how his disability led to some unexpected, positive situations. He is not a strong writer. His first essay was, frankly, bad and made him appear to be bitter and resentful. I am currently working with a student whose first draft was so graphic in its description of panic and fear that it nearly made ME feel panicky and frightened. I asked her if that was how she wanted an admissions officer to view her, and how would the essay convey something positive about her. She had to admit that it wouldn't. I helped her find an angle within her essay to work from that would show something positive. Her essay was also not good. She still wants to write about this particualr struggle, and I haven't told her she can't. I have told her that what she writes is how she will be viewed.
The OP has revealed a deeply personal and sad event and for anyone to be offended by that is taking this whole thing far too seriously. Can we all please remember that this post is to help kids write about the best version of themselves? A student who is a solid writer can write well about anything. But the bottom line is that most kids are not good writers. Writing about mental health is not a great choice, just as writing about politics, abortion, religion, and a first sex experience are also not good topics, UNLESS, maybe, a kid is a great writer.
The entire essay had to do with sexual orientation though and everything a gay teen goes through/ the choices you make along the way.
I am not a writer so I cant say exactly what- but he used a lot of writing tricks he said to paint pictures, tell a story and come full circle. I think the key difference was the quality of the writing in telling a compelling story that had a lot to do with standing out in a positive way too.
I think you can talk about anything if you do it well.
Most kids write with less to say about what they actially did, that shows attributes the top schools want.
Someone other than intparent brought up "hiding."
Having mental illness is not an attribute colleges seek.
I think college is about fit to a large extent and you want to find a fit. John Green is a very talented young adult author who suffers from OCD. He attended Kenyon College and majored in English and religion. I heard him speak once about how he didn't try and hide his illness to get into college instead shared it with the school and talked about its effects and the effects of bullying on him.
You have to write about you.
The original post is one person's advice (and excellent advice IMO). One can certainly ignore it and/or disagree with it. However, this is not the forum to debate it. Write about mental illness if you are inclined. Equate homosexuality with mental illness if that's what you think will put you in the best light. But don't beat a dead horse here. In addition, unless you know a poster IRL, do not say that s/he does not "understand" an issue. Several argumentative posts deleted.
Nor are those attributes like "honesty," as in, "Let me tell you about stealing a car." Oops. Frankly, nor how tests send you into depression, you can't imagine leaving your siblings, you don't like peers, you like to skip class, etc.
If the school itself makes specific requests, follow those. Even Common App prompts are flexible.
Ignore other opinions about your essay, they are only opinions. Websites are full of opinions, from anonymous sources you can't determine, who may or may not know what they're doing.
To your own self be true, student essayists.
You own your creativity and have your own mind--demonstrating those to a potential school is why the application essay exits.
Finally, his 26-yr old 12th grade English teacher assigned a 650 word essay and said a pre-written college essay could be submitted. She gave my son an 83. We told our author/editor family friend and he said the teacher is insane. My son ran a different colored highlighter through each of his teacher’s comments where she said he didn’t meet certain requirements, he then ran the same colored highlighter through his essay where he did, in fact, address the teacher’s requirements, and resubmitted it. She changed the grade to a 97. Not sure what the moral of this story is...maybe trust your instincts and take advice with a grain of salt?
BTW, he’s already been early-accepted to his 2nd choice school with a generous 4-year scholarship. His SAT and GPA are good, not stellar, but his essay is excellent: it’s a critical (and satirical) analysis of the 50-yr old holiday TV special, Rudolph the Red- Nosed Reindeer.
mental health is all about perspective, whether we think it is a problem or drum roll.....a unique gift. it shapes minds and thoughts differently. Lincoln - depressed. Einstein - genius with mental issues.
if mental health has somehow influenced your life, why do we have to perceive it as only creating problems? why do we allow ourselves to believe these diseases will hold us back from success?
accept and embrace your mental issues. manage your health in healthy ways, be aware of your feelings, reach out for help and most importantly, join the fight in changing the world
written from someone with anxiety, depression and ADHD - I'm proud and lucky to be born exactly the way I was and for having the family I have (mental health issues and all). thanks for reading.