Thanks for the feedback! I was planning to portray the girl in a very positive light, emphasizing on her high spirits and unwavering energy despite her heavy workload. And I planned on making some mentions on our friendship and some questions she asked me about America. I portray her as a dricing force or inspiration that pushed me to break out of my shell and deem the judgement of others as inconsequential.
So basically that kind of idea…does this sound cliche? I want it to be profound and unique, not superificial or cliche.