Afraid that my writing style is too abstract?

Hi everyone, thank you so much for your help. These past few months I have spent a lot of time working on my essays and I believe that they are written concisely, but also in a way that represents who I am and highlights my unique voice. Thank you for opening my eyes to the importance of being persuasive here-it was certainly a different approach to my creative writing, in which I mainly focused on myself instead of an audience. Even though the process was stressful at times, I’m grateful for all of the growth and introspection I’ve experienced along the road.