<p>Here is my essay that i wrote in December. I received a score of 11. Not sure it was deserving of an 11 since I had some grammatical mistakes and I was pretty redundant. </p>
<pre><code> The first problem for all of us is not to learn but to unlearn. We hold on to ideas that were accepted in the past, and we are afraid to give them up. Preconceptions about what is right or wrong, true or false, good or bad are embedded so deeply in our thinking that we honestly may not know that they are there. Whether it’s women’s role in society or the role of our country in the world, the old assumptions just don’t work anymore. Adapted from Gloria Steinem, “A New Egalitarian Lifestyle”
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<p>ASSIGNMENT:
Do people need to “unlearn,” or reject, many of their assumptions and ideas? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations. </p>
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