<p>zissou: Regardless of whether or not her piece is good in the opinion of complete strangers (I, among others in this thread, found it to be very informative and well-written… I guess you don’t feel the same way), she wrote the piece with the intention of giving the readers a feel for what NYU is really like. How much satisfaction can you possibly get from criticizing said piece with little to no basis? Aside from the minor typographical error(s) you pointed out, what substantive flaw(s) in her piece is/are leading you to such a harsh conclusion about her ability to write, and further, your decision to attend NYU? Please enlighten us.</p>