<p>People generally avoid posting accepted essays, because the moment you read that essay, you’ll – whether unconsciously or consciously – will somehow follow that essay. You should find your own voice; college app writing is trial-and-error, and you’re more than welcome to ask other CCers for advice, though your fellow classmates and teachers will be more useful, because they know you on a more personal level. They can tell you whether you are portraying yourself accurately, something that strangers like us on CC cannot do.</p>
<p>Good luck!</p>