tyvm for ur feedback. im not too worried about writing the portion regarding “they need to know that if they allow you to return, you will succeed” so i didnt include that in here. im unsure about whether or not it’s okay to include these in my explanation. (root of my problem was related to mental health stuff which my appeal is going to focus on. but at the same time, the “unlucky” stuff like being in a car accident/receiving treatment for 2 mo. while school was in session, grandparents passing away, are things significant enough to affect one’s performance, so i think they should be included. doing so would just make my explanation portion longer and thats why im lost)