<p>Your EC’s are great and test scores are good.</p>
<p>Did you already apply?</p>
<p>You might want to change the wording on the ECs. Saying something is world famous might come off as pompous and you might need to clarify “Boys State” (for what?) and the local community race thing. Also, 8th grade isn’t so important, even though it’s a continuation of choir. Just mention Japan.</p>
<p>And just in general, you need to mention when exactly and how long, too.</p>