<p>i love it!! just make sure not to sound to desperate and show them you really want to go there without telling them that how bad you want to go to the schoool. change the tone of everything. I can tell how much you want to go there but I know other people are appealing and hey are going to say they at thre a trojan. other than football tie in what the academics are like and the staff. show them that your already a trojan without having to write it and sound desperate. you just neeed to change a few things other than that I LOVE IT!</p>