B.U. essay Please critique?

<p>Thanks for the comments, That’s really helpful. I appreciate the comments. </p>

<p>Can you guys chance me at B.U. please.Here is the link.
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/boston-university/615053-chance-me-b-u-please.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/boston-university/615053-chance-me-b-u-please.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;