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Take all the writing classes you can sign up for. The ones with the toughest teachers who let red ink flow like water. If thes sentences I’ve quoted are representative examples of how you write, your style is stiff and awkward to say nothing of grammatically incorrect. Inability to express yourself is going to hurt you in admissions when they read your essays, and will follow you into college whenever you have classes with term papers or essay tests.</p>