Hey everyone,
I’m a senior applying to colleges for Fall 2026, majoring in Political Science. My GPA is on the lower side due to early personal challenges (explained in apps), but I’ve got some strong extracurriculars and a personal story tied to immigration and healthcare policy. Would love honest chances/feedback from admits, current students, or anyone familiar with these schools. Be brutal if needed!
Demographics:
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Gender: Male
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Race/Ethnicity: White/Hispanic (Brazilian-American)
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Residence: Florida (Miami area)
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Income Bracket: Middle class (widowed single parent, some financial struggles)
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Type of School: Public charter high school
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Hooks: First-gen (parents’ education abroad), immigrant family story
Intended Major: Political Science (interested in policy/government, especially immigration and healthcare reform)
Academics:
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GPA: 3.23 weighted 2.87 unweighted Rank: N/A out of ~450)
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SAT: 1300 (670 EBRW, 630 Math) - submitted to AU
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ACT: None
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APs: APUSH, APAH, APCOGO, APpsych, APEURO, APMACRO, APUSGOV
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Other: Skipped 1st grade; switched schools after 9th due to cost (private to public)
Extracurriculars (with descriptions/hours):
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Founder/Leader of FIRM (Florida Immigrant Rights Movement) - Community service/volunteer (12th grade, 5 hrs/wk, 52 wks/yr). Started a nonprofit to support Miami immigrants affected by ICE raids; provide resources, advocacy, education, website, flyers, food drives, legal aid. Ongoing.
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Writer/Editor of “The Obscured Truth” - Research (11th-12th, 10 hrs/wk, 8 wks/yr). 72-page academic essay on democratic erosion under Trump’s second term, calling for civic resistance.
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National Archives Transcriber - Community service (12th, 3 hrs/wk, 32 wks/yr). Transcribed historical docs like JFK files and Revolution papers.
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Creator of “Liberatory Subjectivism” - Academic (11th-12th, 5 hrs/wk, 37 wks/yr). Developed a philosophical framework blending Sartre and Marx; applied to social issues via essays.
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Drummer in Straight-Edge Hardcore Band (XPrescriptionX) - Music (11th-12th, 3 hrs/wk, 52 wks/yr). Toured with friends, promoted drug/alcohol-free lifestyle through music.
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Model UN - Debate/Speech (9th, 4 hrs/wk, 36 wks/yr). Honorable Mention at KnightMUN; left after school transfer but gained debate/diplomacy skills.
- Other responsibilities: Manage household (meals, cleaning, etc.) 4+ hrs/wk while mom works/travels; translate for family.
Essays:
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Common App Personal: About US healthcare inequity, tied to my dad’s death from brain cancer at age 13. Discussed how it felt transactional/cold, inspired me to advocate for policy change.
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AU Supplement (“What are you passionate about?”): Immigration raids in my community, family fleeing Brazil due to political instability (Dilma’s 2016 impeachment), founding FIRM. Mentioned Prof. Christopher Rudolph at SPA to show research. Why AU: Build policy skills in DC.
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Additional Info: Explained low GPA from freshman/soph struggles (personal issues, thought I didn’t need college to make impact), but recent growth via projects/nonprofit.
LOR
- Probably strong from APCOGO teacher and English 3 Honors
What are my chances at AU Any tips for updates or why these might work better? Thanks!
