I don’t have any critique other than which school at Cornell are you applying to? First gen is a good hook and everything else is right in the zone for an ED admission to Cornell. Obviously a better score on the SAT helps but not required here.
I don’t have any critique other than which school at Cornell are you applying to? First gen is a good hook and everything else is right in the zone for an ED admission to Cornell. Obviously a better score on the SAT helps but not required here.