Hi, I’m in 11th grade and hoping to get into Carnegie Mellon
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I’m a US citizen
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I live in Pennsylvania
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I go to a large public high school
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I am still undecided about an intended major, definitely something in science or math but there’s just so many interesting fields (chemistry, biology, astronomy/astrophysics, neuroscience/computational neuroscience)
As of the end of last school year, my unweighted gpa would be 94.2105 and my weighted GPA is 102.5131 or 4.1341 (on a Wt 4 pt scale). My class rank is 25/545
I got 5s on both the AP Chem and Calc AB exams
My PSAT score was 1360 (740 reading and writing 620 math), taken in fall 2023
Here are my PreACT scores were 33 composiite, 33 math, 32 science, 33 STEM, 32 English, and 35 reading
Courses:
*=currently taking
- English: Honors English 9, Honors English 10, Honors English 11*
- Math: Algebra 1, Geometry, Honors Algebra 2, Honors Pre-Calculus, AP Calc AB, AP Calc BC*, AP Statistics*
- Science: Honors Physics, Honors Biology, Honors Chemistry, AP Chemistry, Honors Organic Chemistry (half a year long), AP Physics C: Mechanics*, Anatomy and Physiology*
- History and social studies: Honors US History, Honors World History, AP US Gov*
- Languages: Spanish 1 and 2
- Visual or performing arts: I’ve played the cello since 3rd grade, in the second semester last year I was not in the class due to it conflicting w org chem but I’m happy to say I’m back this year
- Other academic courses: In 8th grade I took a 3-course like bundle called ISTEM that was engineering, physics, and algebra 2; it’s intended for people in 9th grade or above and I was one of the first two 8th graders to ever take it due to previously being accelerated in math and testing out of a grade in science specifically so I could take this course
Awards
Last year I won a grade-level award in science for being invested in chemistry. The awards are like one per subject (science, math, history, art, music, I’m definitely forgetting some) per grades 9 through 11
Extracurriculars
I’ve taken tap and jazz dance lessons since early elementary (I’ve also taken ballet, lyrical, pointe, and musical theater but I’d hesitant to include them since I’m not currently taking them and don’t plan to again so close to graduation)
I’ve frequently participated in math competitions (MathCounts, AMC 10, there was a comp at Millersville University that idk the exact name of) since 8th grade, but I haven’t scored anything impressive
Summer between 9th and 10th grade I did a 5 day long program at Rochester University in Biomedical Technology and Ethical Dilemmas in Healthcare; I was a commuter student for this
This past summer I went to a 3-week long residential program for Special Relativity at Johns Hopkins University through their CTY program. I also went to a week-long space camp at the US Space and Rocket Center in Huntsville Alabama (I was in the Advanced Space Academy specifically, it just means you’re 15-18 years old)
In 9th and 10th grade I was on my school’s bowling team, however I’m a bit undecided whether I’ll compete this year and it’s not like I’m even close to good enough for a sports scholarship lol
The clubs that matter the most to me/I plan on participating more in includes MLOT (Medical Leaders of Tomorrow), Astronomy Club, STAR Club (Stand Together Against Racism), Peer Tutoring Club, HOSA (health occupations competition)
- I joined MLOT in 10th grade, they had intermittent activities that I consistently/nearly always participated in. This year in addition to that it looks like they’ll also be holding weekly meetings. MLOT is like the sister club of HOSA
- I’m new to HOSA this year, it seems like an interesting/fun learning opportunity
- While I was technically in the Astronomy Club Google Classroom last year, the club had exactly zero meetings or events. This year a senior is trying to reanimate it, in the past month there have been two meetings but I think the aim is weekly
- I’m also entirely new to STAR Club, weekly meetings, and it has opportunities for volunteering with/through the Youth Volunteer Corp
- For the Peer Tutoring Club I signed up to be a tutor last year but did not receive a single tutoring session. I went to the yearly intro meeting this year and re-enrolled. The club presidents also mentioned they were considering/trying to work out a system where there’s a specific tutor for a specific class who can give more dependable and personalized help, especially near test dates, and I specifically let them know I was interested in doing this.
Outside of this club I’ve also frequently offered my academic help to my classmates and friends when needed
Also there’s this, but I’m seriously considering stepping down this year or next year, I’m not entirely sure why I’m an officer of this club at this point
- I’m the treasurer of the Art Club, however I have no talent or career interest in art. They were starting the club and needed officers to gain school funding and I decided to throw my name out there because several other people had vocalized being off put by the math aspect and I love math (unfortunately, there is almost no math)
I’ve also done some volunteering, at a local food pantry mostly
(Technically this is done through my school’s Hope For Humanity Club, but I’ve never showed up to a single one of their meetings I just go to the volunteering opportunities)
Essays/LORs/Other
I don’t have any essays currently written and I haven’t really looked at/don’t understand that part of the process yet, advice is definitely welcome though
Schools
I’ll almost definitely be applying to all my schools regular decision (or early action if offered)
- Carnegie Mellon is definitely my top choice, but the affordability is a concern.
- Schools besides Carnegie Mellon that I’m also interested in include: University at Buffalo, Cornell University, Colgate University, Binghamton University
- Schools that I’ve toured but feel iffy about attending: Johns Hopkins, Millersville University, Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute
- Have not toured, but am interested in learning more/like the idea of them: MIT, Princeton, Northeastern University
I kinda doubt anybody actually read all this (I know I couldn’t) but thanks for making it this far lol