<p>Your profile looks good. Have you been to an information session at the college you’d like to apply to? I found with my D this helped in writing the second essay (specific to Human Ecology in her case). In addition there were 6-7 prospective students at the session and they asked them to introduce themselves, I know I’m biased but I thought my D prosented as trhe most poised & confident of the group, which I’m sure didn’t hurt her!</p>