A girl near me wrote about her favorite thing is waiting for her papa johns pizza to come. The adrenaline, etc.
Got into Yale
Here’s some from Johns Hopkins
Yours may be great.
But mental health. Life as lgbtq. Just seems like there are tons of those.
Show them a part of u they can’t see otherwise. If your topic works for u then great. Obviously we haven’t seen your essay.
But many times the first isn’t the best.
My daughter, and not saying it’s good, but write about her love Of tea.