<p>“Fun and biting” is all well and good, but very hard to pull off. I don’t attempt it very often, but yes, I do remember a few times. </p>
<p>Condescension would be pretending you’re pulling it off when you aren’t, or pussyfooting around you because you are young. I think you’re tougher than that. Maybe in lieu of a writing critique from now on I’ll just say “FS, not fun enough.”</p>