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**Decision: Accepted **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1450 (M: 740, R: 710)
ACT (breakdown): 33
SAT II:
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.3 uw / 4.8 out of 6 weighted
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): n/a
AP (place score in parenthesis): Lang Comp: 5 World History: 4 APUSH: 5
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: Wind Ensemble (Band), A.P. Lit, A.P. Calc AB, A.P. Economics, A.P. Spanish Lang
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Hispanic Scholar
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): 4 year member of school’s band program, eventually became Oboe section leader of school’s Wind Ensemble (highest tier band in school, audition only). Public Relations Officer of school’s Spanish National Honors Society. 3 year member of student council. President of school’s Contemporary Culture Society (club focused on talking about modern-day issues in a socratic-like environment)
Job/Work Experience:
Volunteer/Community service:
Summer Activities:
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App: 10/10. I wrote about salchipapa (s/o to my peruvians) and how it reflects on the person who I am today. Talked about how I value the American dream while also mentioning my love for hispanic culture and how it teaches me so many valuable life lessons. I wanted to make my essay as unique as possible, and I think it was the thing that got me accepted.
Supplemental: 9/10. Talked about the mind and how its power can lead one to do extraordinary things (beatles making abbey road). Focused on the idea that at the College of Arts and Sciences, I wouldn’t be graduating with just a economics degree, but with a degree that would be unique to me. The ending was eh, but overall I think I killed the essay
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 8/10, A.P.Physics Teacher. Didn’t really focus on my academics, instead focused on my character. Talked about my passion for learning and how I wish to make a change in the world. Gave it an 8 for how short it was, but overall, it was a really good essay. Almost made me tear up lol
Teacher Rec #2: 10/10 A.P. World History Teacher. Didn’t get to see this one yet but he said he loved writing my essay. I did really well in his class, and I was an attorney for one of his mock trials (got no sleep during that time). Also participated in his philosophy club, which I really enjoyed because it really broadened my perspective on the world. Great teacher!
Counselor Rec: 10/10. She was able to give the AO some perspective on my upbringing and how I was able to achieve a lot while also being limited due to growing up in a Hispanic household. Pretty sure she also talked about my character as well.
Additional Rec:
Interview: 75/25. I was really energetic throughout the whole interview, but it was kinda short and I asked sorta basic questions
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major and College: Economics, College of Arts & Sciences
State (if domestic applicant): NJ
Country (if international applicant): US
School Type: Suburban Public
Ethnicity: Hispanic
Gender: M
Income Bracket: <$150,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): first gen, URM
Reflection
Strengths: Hooks, Letters of Rec, ESSAYS!
Weaknesses: GPA!!
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Prob because I am an URM, but also because those essays carried me.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
General Comments : apply to colleges you don’t think you’re gonna get into. I thought I had a 0 percent chance of getting into Cornell, but somehow I defied the odds!