<p>@prog694 hey! i am another high school senior applying to UIUC, would you mind to read my essays for me and give your thoughts? if you can i would really appreciate it! here is the link
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/university-illinois-urbana-champaign/1710816-please-help-me-to-revise-my-essay.html#latest”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/university-illinois-urbana-champaign/1710816-please-help-me-to-revise-my-essay.html#latest</a>
thank you!</p>