Misspelled “advertisement” four times in the first paragraph alone: advertistments, advertisments, advertisemet, and advertisments again. Misspelled several more times after that.
“sport starts” --> sports stars
“Nikey”
Your paragraph about Nike is decent–if packed with specific information that I highly doubt you knew off the top of your head? The next paragraph, however, seems weak in comparison. Is it complete?? Two sentences are fluff and only one is about your actual point.
No conclusion?