<p>You didn’t mention whether whateve the counselor wrote was true. Will you be able to attend college without the financial aid? If yes, then you can politely request the counselor to take out the paragraph. Otherwise leave it there.<br>
BTW, the counselor can write whatever she feels is appropriate. You really can’t demand how the wording should be. In fact, she shouldn’t have shown the rec to you as she it was supposed to be confidential.</p>