<p>Yeah! I guess something like that’ll work. An important thing with the essays is that you show and not tell. Show that you learned leadership or whatever it may be through anecdotes or stuff like that. That way, you get to factor in your personality, which I think is absolutely crucial. I’m sure there are TONS of other applicants who’ll write something similar to that. Check out this forum by an MIT admissions officer. It really helped me put together my application! </p>
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