I’m just posting to say that this thread has one of the best titles EVER. And probably the best ever in the Prep School subforum since I’ve been coming around!
Technically, she would have had to eat the butterflies first, which could provide a very nice contrast in your essay. Go with it!
My son’s application was filled with the “nice” stuff (like so many others’). Our parent essays often told about his failures and how those shaped him. Nothing sensationalistic, but real and pivotal events in his young life.
@Publisher Thank you! I think I am going to rewrite it first, then I may hit you up for a look over.
@Altras Not one of my prompts asks anything for which I can write about a weakness, or something my child overcame, or some pivotal moment. I have to write a “why this school” for each and a “what delights you” for 2.
Yeah, that second prompt is tough. Probably best to note the “little things” that have absolutely nothing to do with any accomplishments your child’s application or overdone positive traits.
I might have written about how delightfully quiet the house was while they were away at summer camp…nah, scratch that. :-?
I mean, I could just say:
- Farts butterflies
- Spins straw into gold
nuff said?
Just write what is honest for you. Your friend’s children may not delight her as much as yours do you.