<p>a lot of filler. i would recommend cutting out the hash, decent topic and story but the excessive writing distracts it from the point. Make it clear from paragraph one what youre all about, and then sell it to us.</p>
<p>a lot of filler. i would recommend cutting out the hash, decent topic and story but the excessive writing distracts it from the point. Make it clear from paragraph one what youre all about, and then sell it to us.</p>