<p>agreed…
my first essay was excellent with good examples, etc, the way I would write in class.
my second essay was completely terrible and I couldn’t even reread it. It basically was like, “This one time I was at a summer program and I learned to work hard”.
First essay-8, second-10</p>
<p>& I’ve won writing contests and my english teacher (who’s taught at v.good state schools) said I was one of her best students in her career :P</p>