<p>From what I can tell, the Tauck Scholars program is for undergraduates, signifying that you’re probably an undergraduate yourself.</p>
<p>This means that in addition to talking about how much you’d enjoy another University’s program, you talked about how your ideal college major is one the University doesn’t offer. UChicago’s college (which, by the way, is what you’re applying to; not the Booth School, which is for graduates) runs on a liberal arts philosophy, precluding majors in business, nursing, dentistry, or other pre-professional disciplines. What this tells me is that you don’t know very much about UChicago, and the admissions office will probably take the same thing from your essay.</p>
<p>You can try sending them an updated essay, but they’ve already received this one and I can’t see somebody getting accepted with an essay like this. On the bright side, you probably didn’t want to come here anyway, since we don’t have the major you want.</p>