Essays, really? Do colleges have that time and effort?

  1. For several years after college graduation, and with a number of friends working in the college's admissions office, one of my kids got hired several years as a part-time, piece-work admissions essay reader/grader. There were always at least two readers for every essay, one of whom was always a full-time admissions staffer, but the other might be a seasonal worker like my kid.

There was training involved, of course, and a fair amount of mind-meld and common culture. My kid was best friends and housemates with one admissions staffer, and had longstanding friendships with two or three others. At various points, my kid was a full-time student adviser at another college in the area, a graduate student at the university where this was happening, and a researcher with a university affiliate working on campus.

Anyway, the point is: the university was coming out of pocket to pay extra people just to make certain there were enough people to read all of the essays. It wasn’t merely symbolic.

  1. My kids, too, wrote their own essays, 100%, even though others commented. And the essays were very good representations of who they were and how they thought -- something that was not completely in their favor, especially for one who came off as a little immature and self-centered because -- believe it or not! -- he was a little immature and self-centered. His best essay by far was his common app essay, in which he said almost nothing about himself but analyzed a current hot issue in his city's school system. That really showed him at his best, analytical and passionate. His biggest admissions success -- a fat merit scholarship offer -- came from a college that only got that essay.
  2. Re: adults are not better writers. I wrote my own essays. My parents never even saw them. I was a good enough writer to be called in for a plagiarism investigation a few months later, as a college freshman, the main evidence being that a five-page essay I wrote was too polished and too sophisticated for a freshman to have written. I got a prize out of it after they apologized.

I was a better writer then than I am now.