Feedback/help on my extra curriculars so far (Sophomore)

I will try to and thank you so much for taking your time to read what I wrote.

I grew up with instruments, I used to play small instruments like the xylophone as a child, then switched to the flute, piano and then seriously did the violin for a few years. I wouldn’t consider myself confident enough to officially submit something though since it’s been a while.
I did a lot of stuff as a kid, athletics too but I had a burnout in grade 9 which kind of made me unable to follow each genuine passion I had.