<p>I didn’t know that we were supposed to use examples to evidence our conclusions, and since any examples that I (or anyone) could muster would amount to little more than anecdote, I forewent including any substantial ones.</p>
<p>I wrote the essay similarly to how I would in an English class; I walked the thin line between formal and informal writing, my paragraph structure was unusual, as was my syntax in general.</p>
<p>I was rather verbose, yes. That seems to have worked to my benefit.</p>
<p>11 score btw.</p>