<p>Thank you for the constructive feedback, especially notjoe. I will definitely take your advice and apply to several schools.</p>
<p>In response to Fauve: I am not interested in doing sports in college. I would say that I enjoy business because I enjoy motivating and leading people, and my history of leadership in my community attests to that. I also enjoy working with systems so as to maximize their output, and to find unique solutions to problems. And I love learning for learning’s sake, which I feel is shown by my commitment to the academic teams (Which I LOVE).</p>
<p>In response to Gibby: I didn’t mean to come across as disinterested. Going to Harvard (Or any Ivy League school) would be huge for me personally, and I have had a lot of members of the community encouraging me to try. I just don’t want to spend the time focused on Harvard if I am working on a sinking ship.</p>