@figueroafamily This is not a “homework help” site for us to critique your review (see [here[/URL] and [URL=<a href=“***NO homework help posts are allowed on CC*** - High School Life - College Confidential Forums”>***NO homework help posts are allowed on CC*** - High School Life - College Confidential Forums]here](Posting Essays and other Sensitive Information - College Essays - College Confidential Forums)).
If you want to share your review, I suggest creating a blog or something.