<p>I think these are good reasons to want to transfer. I too am looking to transfer to Columbia and some of the reasons you stated are my reasons as well. I think you should speak about diversity and academic atmosphere/strength. I am not sure if you’re applying to other colleges but the transfer essay is supposed to be generic for every school you apply to. I think it would be better if you left your other reasons for the supplemental question: what appeals to you most about Columbia.</p>