<p>Beware! Long, whiney post ahoy!</p>
<p>Let’s begin by analyzing the language/style errors in this essay. First, never, ever use jargon you see on the internet in an SAT essay. Words like “reach schools” and “safety schools” are found only on this website; the average person has no idea what those words mean (although their meanings are obvious in the context provided). Second, avoid colloquial language. “High schoolers” is not a word you’ll find in any dictionary(excluding the Urban Dictionary), so don’t use it. Third, learn how to use apostrophes. This link has all the info you’ll need: [Apostrophes</a> | Punctuation Rules](<a href=“http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/apostro.asp]Apostrophes”>Apostrophes | Apostrophe Rules). Fourth, learn how to use correlatives properly. This link will enlighten you: [Correlative</a> Conjunctions](<a href=“http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/parts-of-speech/conjunctions/correlative-conjunctions.html]Correlative”>Correlative Conjunctions | YourDictionary). Fifth, don’t use big words if you don’t know how to use them. For example, the phrase “a state of morose” should be " a state of moroseness". “Morose” is an adjective, not a noun, so you can’t use it after a preposition in such a manner. Sixth, cut back on the clich</p>