<p>Thanks for the post Cardgames! It was very helpful in helping me see the mistakes I
made. I’ll definitely try to focus on not making such stupid errors in my writing. </p>
<p>However, I have to question your statement about my essay being “not what the SAT wants” - I’m positive you can include personal experiences.The prompt itself states “Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences, or observations”. Besides, I only used one personal anecdote; the other example was an observation of the job market. Also, that last paragraph was a conclusion. Additionally, I completely filled the two pages provided to me in the test book, I’m not sure it’s necessary for me to write a longer essay. </p>
<p>Thanks again for the incredibly detailed post Cardgames. I’ll definitely focus on improving my language mechanics in the future.</p>
<p>Anyone else?</p>