<p>what do you think about this letter.</p>
<p>Dear professor,
My name is nil desperandum. I am a High school student at NeedInternship High School. I was wondering if you would allow me to research with you. I am fascinated by your pursuit of the Biological sciences and I have read Experiment 1 and Experiment 2. I know that I am young and in high school but I promise to conduct myself with the utmost decorum. Would you please email me back and tell me if you would consider allowing me to assist you in your research. I am also willing to send my transcript to you.
Thank you,
Nil</p>
<p>What should i add or take out. Is that respectful enough… what else do I say.</p>